The tenth poster is probably the strongest. It's clean and simple. I would experiment further with different type and type sizes and maybe make the logo a bit smaller.
I like the ones with the heart beat monitor illustration, and the second to last one where the pictures take the form of a water bottle. The ones that are more clean and open are the most successful because they are easier to read the information.
I like the 9th one the best because it reminds me of a water bottle and the image is very powerful. I like the relationship of drinking the water and what we are drinking.
I'm really liking the earthy colors you're using! I'm kind of really drawn to the one with the smoke stack(?) and think you're going in a really good direction.
I also really like the third, with the girl in the image, and the one with the bottle shape. I think that if you can get the image of the bottle to stand out even more, it'll be even better.
I like the work you did on your logo. I would like to see the simplicity of the logo matched with more simplified posters. I think I am the most drawn to the second and the tenth one. I like their simplicity, but I might like to see different colors, like the blues in your logo played up more than the brown.
Kirstin I think as of right now the one I would go with and work on is the 5th one U think that you have the most cohesion here with this one. I am wondering about your use of the heart beat line but I like it. I also feel that your type is to large and you could address what you want to stand out first.
Hey kristin, You have a lot of potentially great posters going on here. My top picks were,6, 8, and 9. I like the heart monitor idea, and 6 was my favorite one with this idea used. I think 8 interests me so much because of the image. It is very eye catching. and 9, i like because of the image idea coming through the water bottle, I feel like it needs to be played with a little more though. To make it look like you are really looking through a water bottle.
me gusta the one with the river inside the bottle shape. I think that idea could be taken farther and be really effective. the logo looks nice too. I also like the image of the waste tower thing.
Maybe try switching up your idea. Why do I want to become a water watcher? Try thinking of what would happen if nobody watched the water and tell people what they will lose if they don't watch water cause watching water sounds boring. Use an idea from the body copy to draw the read in.
7 and 9 are the strongest I think. The red line looks like the pulse line on a life support machine, helps enforce the state in which your organization sees the water (it also conveys the mountains in which they're located yes?)
9 uses the water bottle idea encapsulating the mountains quite successfully, but needs something a little extra to give it some "umph". Maybe the site's type size is too large as well.
The tenth poster is probably the strongest. It's clean and simple. I would experiment further with different type and type sizes and maybe make the logo a bit smaller.
ReplyDeleteI like the ones with the heart beat monitor illustration, and the second to last one where the pictures take the form of a water bottle. The ones that are more clean and open are the most successful because they are easier to read the information.
ReplyDeleteI like the 9th one the best because it reminds me of a water bottle and the image is very powerful. I like the relationship of drinking the water and what we are drinking.
ReplyDeleteI'm really liking the earthy colors you're using! I'm kind of really drawn to the one with the smoke stack(?) and think you're going in a really good direction.
ReplyDeleteI also really like the third, with the girl in the image, and the one with the bottle shape. I think that if you can get the image of the bottle to stand out even more, it'll be even better.
I like the work you did on your logo. I would like to see the simplicity of the logo matched with more simplified posters. I think I am the most drawn to the second and the tenth one. I like their simplicity, but I might like to see different colors, like the blues in your logo played up more than the brown.
ReplyDeleteKirstin I think as of right now the one I would go with and work on is the 5th one U think that you have the most cohesion here with this one. I am wondering about your use of the heart beat line but I like it. I also feel that your type is to large and you could address what you want to stand out first.
ReplyDeleteHey kristin,
ReplyDeleteYou have a lot of potentially great posters going on here. My top picks were,6, 8, and 9. I like the heart monitor idea, and 6 was my favorite one with this idea used. I think 8 interests me so much because of the image. It is very eye catching. and 9, i like because of the image idea coming through the water bottle, I feel like it needs to be played with a little more though. To make it look like you are really looking through a water bottle.
me gusta the one with the river inside the bottle shape. I think that idea could be taken farther and be really effective. the logo looks nice too. I also like the image of the waste tower thing.
ReplyDeleteMaybe try switching up your idea. Why do I want to become a water watcher? Try thinking of what would happen if nobody watched the water and tell people what they will lose if they don't watch water cause watching water sounds boring. Use an idea from the body copy to draw the read in.
ReplyDelete7 and 9 are the strongest I think. The red line looks like the pulse line on a life support machine, helps enforce the state in which your organization sees the water (it also conveys the mountains in which they're located yes?)
ReplyDelete9 uses the water bottle idea encapsulating the mountains quite successfully, but needs something a little extra to give it some "umph". Maybe the site's type size is too large as well.